My Entry for Susanna Hill’s Valentiny Contest

The Valentine Rock Hunt by Eleanor A. Peterson 184 words

After school, Tory and friends gathered near the riverbank to collect heart-shaped rocks for Valentine’s Day. 

Everyone scattered along the bank.

“Let’s hurry before it gets dark,” said Herbert.

Tory paced up and down the bank, overturning logs, searching under shrubs, hoping to find the perfect hearts.

She hummed to herself but stopped when Sasha hollered. “Look, Tory, I only need three more.”

Tory’s heart sank.

She’d never find twelve in time for the big exchange.

Tory looked over her shoulder. Her friends had found a handful.

She only found two heart-shaped rocks she liked.

Just as the sun dipped low, Tory discovered something.

A bottle snuggly stuck between two boulders.                                               

She reached for it, slipping and sliding on the slimy rocky shoreline.

“Hurry! It’s late,” said Sasha.

“Coming,” hollered Tory.

She rubbed the bottle clean.

Tory twisted and pulled the cork.

Inside were tiny heart-shaped glass pebbles and a note.

She delicately pulled it out.

It read, “True friends are like diamonds. I am so lucky to have you. Happy Valentine’s Day! H.H.”

Tory’s heart overflowed with joy.

The best Valentine’s Day ever.

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Author: eleanorannpeterson

I’m a nature-loving adventurer and children’s book author/illustrator whose life has been an exhilarating journey. Originally hailing from Ottawa, Canada, I developed a deep fascination for wildlife while chasing after wild animals in the swamps. Although I initially aspired to become a veterinarian, my path took an unexpected turn when I relocated to Italy. In Italy, I pursued my passion for nature by earning a BS in Environmental Sciences and Territorial Management. This educational experience further ignited my love of writing about the natural world and its diverse wildlife. I’m an active member of several professional organizations, including SCBWI, 12x12PB Challenge, ICWA, and the Children’s Book Academy. Constantly seeking growth and connection within the industry, I engage with fellow writers and storytellers. Despite my affinity for all creatures, I humorously admit that my nine cats can be the most challenging animals to handle. When I’m not wrangling my feline friends, I spend my time writing, doodling, playing with clay, gardening, and exploring the enchanting Italian countryside with my husband. I also love preparing homemade pasta, showcasing my culinary skills.

17 thoughts

    1. Thanks Kim. These contest help us brainstorm new ideas. It’s fun and get’s our creative juices going.

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    1. Thanks Corine. As a child I always collected rocks and other interesting objects in the wilderness. And I still do.

      Reply

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